So here's some developmental drawings trying to change my sketchy characters into the more polished graphic style. Not sure if they're still a bit rough still, but I think they're looking pretty good. I like the coloured smears behind them, a touch I've borrowed from Paul Rogers. If I can get this to fit in the book, it should look good. And obviously these drawings aren't lined up to fit together yet, I was just working on the style.
Here ya go: